experimented with different vocal and rhythmic approaches,7.using(use) rhyming words.At the same time,people started breakdancing at block parties.8.Because it's cheap and easy and people 9.were bored(bore) with the pop music of the day,hip hop became 10.successful(success).
Ⅱ.写作改错双练
根据提示,利用本单元所学知识完成下面小作文,并改正学生习作。 1.杰克是我特别喜爱的音乐创作者之一,他的音乐来自日常生活。(composer;arise from)
2.他的大部分时间都致力于音乐创作,并强调人与自然的和谐。(devote...to...;lay emphasis on;harmony)
3.每次我听他的音乐,内心都会被触动。(every time;touch)
4.他的音乐给人耳目一新的感觉,给我留下了深刻的印象。(refreshing;make a deep impression on)
第一步:练写作
用适当的连接词将上述句子连成一篇短文。
第二步:练改错
下面是李明针对本文的习作,其中有5处错误,请你帮他纠正过来。 Jack is one of my favourite music composer,whose music arose everyday life.He devoted most of her time to music composing and laid emphasis on the harmony of man with nature.Every time when I listened to his music,my inner heart was touched.His music was refreshing and made a deeply impression on me.
【答案】
∧composer
Jack is one of my favourite music composers,whose music arose from her
everyday life.He devoted most of his time to music composing and laid emphasis on the harmony of man with nature.Every time when ﹨I listened to his music,my inner deeply
heart was touched.His music was refreshing and made a deep impression on me.