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1．讨论：
? 本文短短三段，一共有多少个―he‖?在译文中也悉数保留吗？原因是什么？
代词的使用在英汉两种语言中有何差别？请查找相关的参考书，如《英汉语篇综合对比》，《语言对比与研究与对外汉语教学》，《汉英应用对比概论》，《汉英篇章对比研究》等著作。
? 本文第一句话为一个长句，应如何处理？如何理顺句子结构的关系，让意思
明确？
? tax sb. with affectation是什么意思？
2．课后作业：
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1）先自己翻译下面的作家介绍，然后可以比较一下原文和译文中第三人称单数的差异，看看哪些是可以避免使用的。
作家简介
取自中国外语教育基地语料库
Ai Wu (1904 -1992), originally named Tang Daogeng, was from Xindu, Sichuan. In his early life, he spent times in Kunming of China, Myanmar, Malaysia and Singapore, working as a newspaper proofreader and a primary school teacher. He was a member of the League of Leftist Writers. He wrote about customs, habits and ways of life in border and remote regions and portrayed people pushed out of the normal rails of life. He was good at combining emotion expression, story telling and portrayal of men. He was praised by readers for his uniquely original method, fresh content and beautiful style. His writings demonstrated an unrelenting strength of life through the portrayal of uninhabited romantic atmosphere. Mrs. Shi Oing is a representative short story of his.
The number of the third-person reference: 5
Bing Xin (1900 -1999), originally known as Xie Wanying, was from a naval officer\'s family in Changle, Fujian. During the May 4th Movement, she took an active part in patriotic activities and began literary creation. She was a member of the Literature Society. After graduation from university, she went to study in the United States. She later taught in Girls College of Humanities of Tsinghua University and Yenching University. Her writings ranged from poems, proses to short stories. The Separation is one of her representative works. Bing Xin developed a unique literary style of her own. Her works displayed an intimate and sincere passion, used refreshing and delicate expressions and were euphemistic and original. Her language was smooth and precise.
The number of the third-person reference: 4
参考译文：
艾 芜（1904——1992）四川新都人。原名汤道耕。早年曾在昆明及缅甸、马来西亚、新加坡等地流浪，做过报馆校对、小学教员等。是―左联‖成员。艾芜写边野地方的风情，描绘那些被生活挤出正常轨道的人们，善于将抒情、叙事、写人结合起来。以表现手法别致，内容的新鲜和风格的优美，为人们所赞赏。他的小说在粗犷的浪漫主义氛围中，呈现出不屈的生命力量。《石青嫂子》是其短篇小说的代表作之一。
第三人称照应数：0
冰 心（1900-1999）福建长乐人。原名谢婉莹。出生于海军军官家庭。―五四‖运动时期，曾参加过爱国运动，并开始文学创作。是文学研究会成员。大学毕业后赴美留学。曾在燕京大学、清华大学女子文理学院任教。冰心的作品主要有诗歌、散文和短篇小说等。《分》是她的代表作之一。在艺术上，冰心有自己独特的风格，她的作品感情真挚亲切，文笔清新隽丽，委婉别致，语言流利晓畅，简洁凝练。 第三人称照应数：0
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3．布置课后翻译: Low Bow Village，下周交。指定一名学生查找有关本文相关的内容，准备下一节课向全班汇报（5?），成绩记入平时成绩。
4．课后练习：增词和减词 （一）重复名词
1．重复英语中作宾语的名词
（1）We should learn how to analyze and solve problems.
（2）I had experienced oxygen and/or engine trouble.
2．重复英语中作表语的名词
（3）He became an oil baron---all by himself.
3．重复英语前置词短语前所省略的名词
英语中常重复使用前置词，而将第二个，第三个前置词前的名词省略，翻译时则往往要把此名词重复。
（4）The doctor will get more practice out of me than out of one hundred ordinary patients.
4．重复英语中作先行词的名词
英语定语从句常用关系词引导，它一方面代表定语从句所修饰的那个先行词（名词或代词），一方面在从句中担任一个成分。汉语中没有关系词，往往需要重复这个作先行词的名词。英语中的同位语，在译文中有时也可以重复先行词。 （5）The little apprentice in particular lived in terror of the boss, who had borne down on him so often and so hard that there was little left.
（6）The President announced, with obvious relish, that the planes took off from
（二）重复动词
1．英语句子常用一个动词连接几个宾语或表语，在译文中往往要重复这个动词。
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（7）Chairman Mao is an activist, a prime mover, an originator and master of strategy achieved by alternating surprise, tension and easement.
2．英语句子中动词后有前置词时，在第二次第三次往往只用前置词而省略动词，在译文中则要重复动词一代替英语中重复的前置词。若英语中连前置词也省略了，但译文中仍可以重复动词。
（8）We talked of ourselves, of our studies, of our prospects, of each other--of everything.
(9) But his wife kept dinning in his ears about his idleness, his carelessness, and the ruin he was bringing on his family.
（三）重复代词
1． 英语中用代词的地方，翻译时往往可按汉语的习惯重复其所替代的名词。 （10）In China, they them, thus planned victory.
2．英语中用物主代词its, his, their, 等等以代替句中作主语的名词（有时附有修饰语）时， 翻译时往往可以不用代词而重复其作主语的名词（有时附有修饰语），以达到明确具体的目的。
