大学英语四级系列讲座之二 四级作文By Li Yonghuaimao 外国语学院大学英语教学部
1.各类体裁写作模板
2.强化写作技巧3.写作范文欣赏
写作总论写作部分考核的技能是： A.思想表达 1).表达中心思想 2).表达重要或特定信息 3).表达观点、态度等 B.篇章组织 4).围绕所给的题目叙述、议论或描述， 突出重点 5).连贯地组句成段，组段成篇
C.语言运用 6).运用恰当的词汇 7).运用正确的语法 8).运用合适的句子结构 9).使用正确的标点符号 10).运用衔接手段表达句间关系(如对比、原因、 结果、程度、目的等) D.写作格式 11).运用正确的符合英语表达习惯的写作格式
写作总论
写作总论评分标准：本题满分为15分. 共分五等：2-4分、5-7分、8-10分、11-13分及1415分。
2-4分 条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或在部分句子均有错误， 且多数严重错误。
5-7分 基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言 错误。8-10分 基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语 言错误相当，多其中有一些是严重错误。 11-13分 切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。
14-15分 切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性好。基本上无语 言错误，仅有个别小错误
大学英语四级写作 从体裁来看，四级作文主要以议论文和说明 文为主，主要包括：
1. 对比论述型 2. 对策方法型 3. 现象分析型(包括: 问题分析型) 4. 图表分析型 5. 叙事型 6.观点论证型 7. 应用文型
1. 对比论述型 这类作文多为提纲式作文，议论文体裁。通过论述 相反的两个观点，或分析评论某一社会现象的优缺 点，然后给出自己的见解和看法，是四级考试写作 中最常见的作文形式。 例如： Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists? (2005. 12) 1. 名校校园正成为旅游新热点 2. 校园是否应对游客开放， 人们看法不同 3. 我认为。。。 Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary? 1. 很多人认为有必要举行英语口语考试，理由 是。。。 2. 也有人持不用的意见。。。 3. 我的看法和打算
对比分析类作文主要有两种：
1) 是需要考生对比阐述两种观点或做法及各 自的理由，人后表明自己的观点或做法并说明 理由； 2) 是需要考生对比阐述某事物的利和弊、好 处和坏处或优点和缺点，继而表明自己的看法 或态度。 下面的模板是针对第一种类型来讲解，至于第 二种类型，考生只需要在掌握第一种类型结构 的基础上进行适当变形即可。
利弊题型模板 Model 1:
Nowadays many people prefer to (______) because it plays a significant role in our daily life. Generally speaking, its advantages can be s
een as follows. On one hand, (______).One the other hand,(_______). But every sword(刀) has two blades(刀面)/Every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of the prominent disadvantages is that (______).To make matters worse,(______). Through the above analysis, I believe that The positive aspects far outweigh(超过) its negative aspects/the advantages far outweigh its disavantages, because (_____).
Model 2: There is no consensus among people as to the view of whether (_____). The opinions vary from person to person. Some people hold the idea that (____).A case in point is that (_____). On the other hand, other may have a quite different view. According to them, (_____).The most typical example is that (______). Weighing the pros and cons (正反面)of these arguments, I am inclined to agree with the latter. Admittedly(公认地), the former point of view seems reasonable in saying to some extent, but it is more convincing that (_____).
对比论述型作文 真题实战 Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary? (2000. 6) Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition of the topic Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary? You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below.
1. 很多人认为有必要举行英语口语考试，理由是
2. 也有人持不同的意见， 3. 我的看法和打算
注：辩论式议论文模版 Model 1: Some people believe (argue, recognize, think) that (观 点1). But other people take an opposite side. They firmly believe that (观点2). As for me, I agree to (the former / latter idea). There are a dozen of reasons behind my belief. First of all, (论据1). More importantly, (论据2). Most important of all, (论据3). In summary, (总结观点). As a college student, I am supposed to (表决心). 或:From above, we can predict that (预测).
Model 2: People hold different views about (X). Some people are for the opinion that (观点1), while others point out that (观点2). As far as I am concerned, (the former / latter opinion) holds more weight. For one thing, (论据1). For another, (论据2). Last but not the least, (论据3). To conclude, (总结观点). As a college student, I am supposed to (表决心).或 From above, we can predict that (预测).
Model 3:There is no consensus among people on opinions about X(争论的焦点). Some people are for the view that (观点1), while others take an opposite side, firmly believing that (观 点2). As far as I am concerned, (the former / latter notion) is preferable in many senses. The reasons are obvious. First of all, (论据1). Furthermore, (论据2). Among all of the supporting evidences, one is the strongest. That is, (论据3). A natural conclusion from the above discussion is that(总结 观点). As a college student, I am supposed to (表决心).
或 From above, we can predict that (预测).
