2) 在GMAT中,双重所有格,即 the rates of immigrants’ 表达错误, 应该改为the rates of immigrant或 者 immigrants’ rates
3) 对比对象中出现的重复名词用that或those代替,that代替前面出现的单数名词,those代替前面出现
的复数名词
(A) immigrants’ rates不能同other immigrant group相比.
(B) rates of entrepreneurship不能同other immigrant group相比
(C) 正确, 用those代替前面出现过的rates,比较双方对应
(D) the rates of entrepreneurship不能同other immigrant group相比
(E) 使用双重所有格,错误; 主谓不一致:主语是rates,谓语应该用exceed.
句子结构: Immigrants… exhibit rates of entrepreneurship exceeding those of…
61. (27809-!-item-!-188;#058&003354) Tyrannosaurus rex and closely resembles South American predatory dinosaurs, have been (A) The bones of Majungatholus atopus, a meat-eating dinosaur that is a distant relative of Tyrannosaurus rex and closely resembles South American predatory dinosaurs, have been discovered in Madagascar. (B) The bones of a meat-eating dinosaur, Majungatholus atopus, a distant relative of Tyrannosaurus rex and with a close resemblance to South American predatory dinosaurs, has been discovered in Madagascar. (C) In Madagascar, the bones of a meat-eating dinosaur, Majungatholus atopus, distantly related to Tyrannosaurus rex and closely resembled South American predatory dinosaurs, have been
discovered. (D) A distant relative of Tyrannosaurus rex, bearing a close resemblance to South American predatory dinosaurs is Majungatholus atopus, a meat-eating dinosaur, the bones of which have been discovered in Madagascar. (E) A distant relative of Tyrannosaurus rex and closely resembling South American predatory dinosaurs, the bones of a meat-eating dinosaur, Majungatholus atopus, have been discovered in Madagascar.
考点: 逻辑表达（Logical Predication） 主谓一致（Agreement） 平行对称（Parallelism）
1) 修饰成分应该尽可能靠近修饰对象
2) 系表结构可以跟动词结构平行,即 It is a distant relative of Tyrannosaurus rex and closely
resembles South American predatory dinosaurs.是符合平行结构的
3) 不能随意改变原句的重心,一般来说选项A的重心跟正确选项的重心一致
(A) 正确, 主谓一致; a meat-eating dinosaur that…作为Majungatholus atopus的同位语,解释说明
Majungatholus atopus; dinosaur that is a distant relative…and closely resembles…结构符合平行要 求
(B) 主谓不一致,主语the bones,谓语应该用have been; and前后不平行,前者是名词,a distant relative
后者是介词短语with a close…
(C) 介词短语In Madagascar离它的修饰对象have been discovered太远,
(D) 改变句子重心,原句的重心是bones have been discovered,而该选项的重心是a distant relative is
Majungatholus atopus; bearing a close resemblance to结构表达笨拙,并且原句中该成分同a distant
relative并列,而这里变成分词结构,修饰a distant relative,成为了附属成分
