Charles and Linda were seeing near the top of the
(93)seen (94)√ (95)with building. When they came down the police were angry to them. One police officer said to them, \
have elevators (电梯), don't they? Why don't you use them?\Ⅴ.
一、评分原则:
1. 本题总分为25分,其中内容和语言占24分,词数占1分。按7个档次给分。 2. 评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡
量,确定或调整档次,最后给分。词数在80—120之内的,加1分。
二、内容要点:
1) 祖母生日 2) 买礼物 3) 乘车去祖母(或叔叔)家 4) 见面 5) 送生日礼物 6) 准备午餐 7) 午餐 8) 告别 三、各档次的给分范围和要求:
第七档:(22—24分) 能写明全部或绝大部分要点;语言基本无误;行文连贯,表达清楚。 第六档:(18—21分) 能写明全部或绝大部分要点;语言有少量错误;行文基本连贯,表达
基本清楚。
第五档:(14—17分) 能写明大部分要点;语言有一些错误;行文不够连贯,但不影响基本
意思的表达。
第四档:(11—13分) 能写出基本要点;语言虽有较多错误,尚能达意。 第三档:(7—10分) 能写出部分要点;语言错误多,影响意思表达。
第二档:(3—6分) 能写出一、两个要点;语言错误很多,只有个别句子可读。 第一档:(0—2分) 只能写出与所要求内容有关的一些单词。 四、说明:
1) 内容要点可用不同方式表达。 2) 对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。
3) 凡不以第一人称“I”的口吻表述者,从原得分中扣除5分。 五、One possible version:
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It was Grandma's birthday. Father, Mother and I went to visit her. She lives with my uncle in a village not too far away. Early in the morning we bought some presents and took the bus to get there.
Grandma and Uncle were so glad to see us . We gave the presents to Grandma and she was very happy . Then we sat down to talk, while Uncle went to prepare lunch. The meal was so nice that we all enjoyed it very much. At 4 o'clock, we said goodbye and set off for home.
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