(8) With days went on, their school became more and more beautiful.
七、冗言错误
冗言错误是指受汉语的影响，句中用了多余的词，造成语义重复。主要有 1形容词副词比较级前用了多余的more
2动词后接介词或副词造成语义重复 3固定用法中多余的词等。 (1) I never knew that a ride down a river could be so much exciting.
(2) We must study hard in order to serve for the people better in the future. (3) Last year summer I paid a visit to the school where I studied in 2007. (4) Today I visited the Smiths ----- my first time visit to an American family. (5) I believed our country will become more stronger in the future.
(6) You don’t have to return back the books to the library until the end of this term. (7) Clever as she is, but she didn’t pass the exam.
(8) I went through the test for many times but I could only answer three out of the twenty questions.
(9) I had better to stop now. ( 2009 全国卷2)
八、介词错误
介词错误有 1介词的遗漏 2副词性和连词性词组前使用多余的介词 3固定搭配中的介词误用等。
(1) Will you join in us if we decide to do the new experiment?
(2) Lisa was working as a secretary in a big firm for the first time I met her. (3) I asked my father the money and he gave me 10 dollars.
(4) The discovery she’s made in medicine is great importance to science.
(5) She had a feeling that the sad-looking man was not a person she could trust or talk.
(6) At a cold winter night a poor girl was selling matches in a street.
(7) One rainy day while I was walking home with one of my friends, a trunk came to a stop besides us. （2009浙江）
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(8) Mr Smith was at vacation when he got a call from his boss.
九、连词错误
连词错误主要有 1并列连词and, but, or的误用
2固定搭配中的连词使用错误 3根据上下文的关系连词使用错误。 (1) It is a very important examination but I can’t afford to fail it.
(2) Some friends of his go to see him every day, they take him lots of good books and fresh fruit. (2009 陕西)
(3) In some places you can borrow many books as you want.
(4) This man might need the umbrella himself, and he preferred to give it to someone else. (2009 浙江)
(5) It’s years after I met him in my hometown in 2005.
十、定语从句错误
1从句中缺少作主语的关系代词。 2从句中使用了多余的代词。 3 that与which的误用。 4关系代词与关系副词的误用。 5从句谓语动词的人称和数与先行词不一致。 6定语从句与强调句型误用。 (1) The first passengers had left the sinking ship were women and children.
(2) The technicians took a day to complete the work I had planned to finish it within a week.
(3) All of a sudden the lights went out in the dinning-room, where the guests were having dinner there.
(4) One day I saw a second-hand bicycle, that was only one hundred yuan. (5) I think it is one of the best films that has ever been shown this year. (6) It was not until 1979 when he got happily back to work.
(7) At that time something unexpected happened to his family, this made it necessary for him to stop school and work in society.
(8) I decided to write Chaplin, one of his films I had seen seven years before. (9) I’m sure I am not the only fan who want to know things about you.
十一、主谓一致错误
谓语动词的人称和数与主语不一致。
(1) The number of passengers killed in the accident were surprising.
(2) Not every student know the importance of mastering the English language. (3) Both my parents miss you a lot. So do our friend, Cathy.
(4) Although many of the houses in the small town are still in need of repair, there have been much improvement in their appearances.
(5) The first two questions in the test paper were difficult, but the rest was easy. (6) Nick is looking for another job because nothing he does satisfy his boss.
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十二、名词性从句错误
1根据连接词的意思的误用。
2 Whether和 if (是否)的混用：宾语从句可用 whether 或if (但是在介宾后只能用whether), 其他从句只用 whether (1) It didn’t matter that I would win or not.
(2) Little is known about his childhood except he began to work in a factory at the age of ten.
(3) I want to know how I can do to improve my English. (4) The question if he will come or not is not settled. (5) He is always ready to help whomever is in trouble. (6) Are these things all what they learn at school?
(7) I’d email you and let you know what things are going. (2009 全国卷2)
十三、平行结构错误
在表达相同的概念是要使用相同的语法结构，即 1动词与动词相配（其时态及其他变化形式要一致） 2形容词与形容词相配 3分词与分词相配 4短语与短语相配
平行结构常借助于连词and, or, but,以及连词词组not only…but also, not.. but, either…or, as well as, rather than 等。
(1) He looked at the children playing under the tree and feeling very pleased.
