enough courage and willpower can help many survive.
The most recent example is from the earthquake in Sichuan Province in May of 2008. While thousands of school kids were killed by collapsed school buildings, all students from a middle school survived even without a single one being hurt. That’s because of their timely and orderly evacuations (撤离), which they had been drilled in every term.
It’s good to see this program as the most important activity of a national campaign to make students be aware of personal safety. Chinese Education Ministry has called on all schools nationwide to give lessons on self-protection knowledge in times of emergency every term. 【写作内容】
某中学生英文报就“学生安全教育”为主题举行英语征文活动。你阅读了上述文章后,准备给该报投稿,稿件内容要点包括: 1. 以约30个词概括以上短文内容。
2. 然后以约120个词谈谈你的观点,并包括以下要点: (1) 安全教育的重要性;
(2) 举例说明中学生在日常安全方面应该注意的事项; (3) 呼吁中学生提高安全意识。 【写作要求】
1. 在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子; 2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【评分标准】
概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,篇章连贯。
III 写作(共两节,满分40分)
第一节 基础写作(共1小题,满分15分)
Notice
As World Environment Day is approaching, the Students’ Union is going to organize an English-speaking contest, with the theme of “Protect our environment and save our energy” to increase our knowledge about the environment and improve our spoken English. The contest will be held in the Lecture Hall on the 5th floor in the classroom building from 4:00 p.m. to 5:30 p.m., on Friday June 5th. Those who want to participate in the contest are supposed to sign up through e-mail at studentscenter @ 163 before May 25th. Lots of prizes will be delivered for the contest, including three first prizes, six second and twelve third ones. Dear fellow schoolmates, you are warmly welcome to be there and thanks for your participation.
The students’ Union
基础写作评分标准
[评分说明] 基础写作的评分建议采用分析法,即按照语言、内容和连贯三项指标分别给分,最后累计作为该题的总得分。 赋项评分标准 分 目
7-8 具有很好的语言运用能力;语法和句子结构准确性高,词汇方面使用较好,只有少许错误。 5-6 具有较好的语言运用能力;语法和句子结构准确性较好,有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,但不影响理解。 语言3-4 语言运用能力一般;语法和句子结构基本准确,语法结构或词汇方面的错误不影响理解。 内容连贯 1 1-2 0 备注 5 4 3 2 1 0 2 1.5 语言运用能力较差;语法和句子结构基本不够准确,语法结构或词汇方面的错误较多,而且影响了对句子意义的理解。 语言运用能力很差;语法、句子结构、词汇错误很多,句子意义无法理解。 每多或少写一个句子,扣1分。 包括了所有信息内容。 包括了大部分信息内容。 包括了基本信息内容。 包括了小部分信息内容。 包括了少许信息内容。 没有包括所提供的信息内容。 内容连贯,而且结构紧凑。 内容连贯性比较好,而且结构比较紧凑。 内容连贯性较差,而且结构不够紧凑。
0 备注
内容缺乏连贯性,而且结构松散。 文不对题,给0分。 第二节 读写任务(共1小题,满分25分)
The author introduces a TV program which is concerned with self-protection and takes the earthquake in Sichuan as an example to convey the significance of giving lessons on self-protection to students.
In common with the author, I believe that strengthening the consciousness of self-protection is a must for the students. Since the students are the future builders of a country, it’s vital for schools to equip them with the capability of protecting themselves.
To heighten students’ awareness of self-protection in the daily life, there are many aspects to be paid attention to. Firstly, children can’t press the electrical button with wet hands. What’s more, kids are not allowed to swim in the stormy days. Thirdly, take caution when crossing the street. Wait until the light turns green.
On the whole, we can’t emphasize the importance of self-protection too much. Only when we have a good command of self-protection skills, can we have a safe life and enjoy the brilliant future.
读写任务评分标准
[评分说明] 读写任务的评分建议采用综合法,即:根据总体印象给分。概要和文章的分值分别为5分和20分。
读写任务的评分标准
项目 概 3 括 0-1 2 4 5 按照要求概括了原文的主要信息,没有增加与原文无关的信息,语言结构正确,行文规范。 基本按照要求概括了原文的主要信息,没有增加与原文无关的信息。语言结构正确,行文规范。 基本按照要求概括了原文的主要信息,但包含一些不相关的信息。语言结构基本正确,行文比较规范。 不能按照要求概括了原文的主要信息,包含较多不相关的信息。语言结构不够准确,行文不够规范。 没有按照要求概括原文的主要信息,基本是不相关的信息。语言结构不准确,行文不规范。 18-20 包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题明确,内容丰富。 词汇丰富,用词得当。能有效运用合适的语言结构,而且没有(或极少)语法错误。 篇章结构的连贯性好。 赋分 评分标准

