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2007年中考英语满分作文精品大全－江西省
中学生学习时间长、压力大，专家建议学生每天课后应采取适当的方式放松自己。某英文报“学生习作”专栏正在就“学生适当的放松方式”这一话题进行征文。假设你是二十二中初三(3)班的班长，最近你对班上同学课后放松方式进行了调查。请根据表格提供的调查信息和要求写一篇短文向该报投稿。 对 象 人 数 二十二中初三（3）班 60人（男：31人；女：29人） 1.看电视（30人） 2.玩电脑游戏（12人） 常用放松方式 3.听音乐（8人） 4.进行体育锻炼（5人） 5.没有时间放松（5人） 哪一种（些）放松方式是适当的？ 你的观点 为什么？ 注意：1.短文包括对调查相关信息的介绍和你自己的观点；
2.词数：80-100。题目和开头已为你写好，不记入总词数。
The Proper Way(s) for Students to Relax
I am the monitor of Class3,Grade 3,No.22 Middle School. Recently I have made a survey of the students in my class on ways to relax after class. __________________
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The Proper Way(s) for students to Relax
I am the monitor of Class 3, Grade 3, No. 22 Middle School. Recently I have made a survey of the students in my class on ways to relax after class.
There are 60 students in my class (31 boys and 29 girls).Different students have different ways to relax. Half of the students often watch TV. 12 students like to play computer games while 8 enjoy listening to music.5 students think doing sports is a good way and another five are too busy to relax.
As we study long hours every day and suffer from too much pressure, every student should choose proper ways to relax. In my opinion, watching TV or playing computer games is not a proper way to help us relax. I thing taking exercise
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is a proper way because it can rest our brains and eyes. Besides, it can help improve our health. Therefore, I often play pingpang.
点评：第一段和第二段是叙述表格中的信息，第三段是表达自己的观点。在叙述信息时，作者使用了简洁地语言把意思准确地传达出来；在抒发自己的观点时候，作者详细地阐明了自己的观点。详略得当，衔接自然，结构紧凑，不愧为一篇佳作。
积累卡片 好词 好句 英汉互译 1. recently最近 2. suffer 受痛苦 3. pressure 压力 4. proper 正确 5. improve 提高 1. As we study long hours every day and suffer from too much pressure, every student should choose proper ways to relax. 因为我们要学习很长时间，承受着很大的压力，所以每个学生都应选择正确的方法来放松。 2. I thing taking exercise is a proper way because it can rest our brains and eyes. 我认为做运动是合适的方法因为它能使我们的大脑和眼睛得到
2007年中考英语满分作文精品大全－乐山市
最近，教育部启动了\阳光体育\运动，建议全国中小学生每天锻炼一小时，让他们健康、快乐。此项活动受到广大学生的欢迎。李华对所在学校学生参加活动的情况和反映做了一 个调查。请你根据下面调查表的内容，帮他给校报写一篇报道。报道的开头和结尾已给出。词数， 80词左右.
Interviewees(调查对象) Activities Feelings most students play sports interested have lots of fun skip rope(跳many students 绳) some students take a walk relaxed happy keep healthy Reasons enjoy fresh air instead of staying in the classroom have no enough room(空间)on the playgound;have no a few students worried enough time to finish homework The “Sunshine Sports\program is warmly welcomed in our school ,Nearly all the students have taken part in it.
No matter what students think about the program， all the students like the idea which is to make students happy and keep them fit at the same time.
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The\Sunshine Sports\program is warmly welcomed in our school. Nearly all the students have taken part in it. Most students are interested in playing sports. They think they have lots of fun. Many students are happy with skipping rope. They believe it really keeps them healthy. A few students are relaxed while taking a walk. They find it good to enjoy fresh air instead of staying in the classroom. However， a few students are still worried that there is not enough room on the playground and they may not have enough time to finish their homework.
No matter what students think about the program，all the students like the idea which is to make them happy and keep them fit at the same time.
点评：本文最大的优点在于，作者在传达不同的学生为什么选择不同的运动的时，所使用的表达方式，比如They think，They believe，They find it good等，避免了重复，展现了语言的多样化。 这并不是每个同学都能做到的，很多同学在表达观点时很容易犯重复的毛病，通通使用I think，这样使文章看起来很乏味，因此，本文作者丰富的表达方式有很大的借鉴意义。
积累卡片 好词 好句 英汉互译 1. warmly 热烈地 2. believe 相信 3. fresh 新鲜的 4. fit 健康的 1. They find it good to enjoy fresh air instead of staying in the classroom. 他们发现比起呆在教室里，呼吸新鲜更有乐趣。 2. However， a few students are still worried that there is not enough room on the playground and they may not have enough time to finish their homework. 然而，一些学生仍然很担心操场上没有足够的任他们施展的空间，因为他们担心他们可能完不成作业。
2007年中考英语满分作文精品大全－沈阳市
假如你是China Daily 中学生版的记者，请根据下面材料写篇报道。
背景：这所学校建于三年前，当时有数百名儿童因贫困而失学，后来人们为“希望工程 (Hope Project)”捐款200余万元，当地政府用这笔款项兴建了这所学校。
现状：教师60人，学生900人，教学楼内有18个教室，另有1，200平方米的操场，微机室，语音室，图书馆各一个。这所学校已远近闻名，学生们都很努力，因为是希望工程给了他们学习的机会。
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The school was built three years ago. Before that hundreds of children couldn?t go to school
because they were very poor. Later the local government was offered over two million yuan by people for “Hope Project”. Thus the school came into being.
Now there are sixty teachers and nine hundred pupils in this school. You can see the bright
teaching-building with eighteen classrooms, a computer room, a sound lab and a library. In front
of the building pupils can play on the playground with a size of 1,200 square meters
The school has been well-known in the nearby area. The students there study very hard
because they all know that it is “Hope Project” that has given them the chance to go to school.
点评：同样，这是另外一篇根据提示信息完成的文章，作者使用了非常准确地语言把提示信息简洁明了地表达出来。本文表达通顺流畅，基本无语法错误，作者能够准确地翻译提示信息中的一些专有词汇，如computer room, sound lab, 可见作者平时还是有一定的积累量。
积累卡片 好词 英汉互译 1. government 政府 2. offer 提供 3. pupil 小学生 4. bright 明亮的 5. meter 米 好句 1. Thus the school came into being. 因此学校就成立了。 2. The students there study very hard because they all know that it is “Hope Project” that has given them the chance to go to school. 那里的学生学习都很刻苦，因为他们知道是希望工程给了他们上学的机会。 2007年中考英语满分作文精品大全－苏州市
假设某英语杂志“奥运来了”栏目正在举办征文比赛。请你根据下面的“奥运会徽”和内容要点，用英语以“中国印-----舞动的北京”为题写一篇短文，参加比赛。
内容：
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会徽设计成中国印，名为“中国印-----舞动的北京”；
印中的“京”字代表北京，像个舞者，向世界展开双臂；
印是红色的，下面写有“北京2008”，红色代表好运；
“舞动的北京”使你想到……..(考生自拟，至少一点)。
注意：
词数90字左右。短文的标题和开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；
短文须包括所有内容要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Chinese Seal------Dancing Beijing
The Olympic emblem(奥运会徽) for the 2008 Olympic Games was shown to the public in Beijing, August 3, 2003.
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Chinese Seal------Dancing Beijing
The Olympic emblem(奥运会徽) for the 2008 Olympic Games was shown to the public in Beijing, August 3, 2003.The emblem, named “Chinese Beijing”, was designed as a Chinese seal with the words “Beijing 2008”written below. The Chinese word “Jing” meaning Beijing appears on the seal. It looks like a lively dancer, opening his arms to the world. The seal is red, an important colour for the Chinese people, and red also represents good luck.
I think“Dancing Beijing”will attract more and more people from the world to Beijing and Beijing will open its arms to people from all over the world in 2008.
点评：作者准确地传达了提示内容所要表达的意思，虽然看起来有点像翻译，但是即便是翻译，也是很到位的，这不是每个初中生都能完成的。在语言方面，作者显得非常地娴熟老练，比如be designed to, appear, represent等难词的运用体现作者厚实的积累，此外，作者还非常自然地使用了状语，同谓语，后置修饰语等手法使一句话传达了很丰富的意思。
积累卡片 好词 好句 英汉互译 1. design设计2. lively 活泼的 3. important 重要的 4. represent 代表 5. attract 吸引 1. It looks like a lively dancer, opening his arms to the world.
