【英语短文改错精编版】高考训练试题（30题含答案及解析）
1、短文改错（10 分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。 文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（?），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（
）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I was often troubled by lack of confidences. So I applied for a job at an exhibition as reporter last term. The exhibition was held annual to display the latest products in the field of education. At that time, I was responsible for interview parents who bought the learning tools. While talking with him, I found it was not so hard as I think. One lady even praised me but asked her son to learn from me. I realized the experience was in great value and nothing was more excited than communicating with people.
From this experience, I am fully aware that we should take real action if our personality that needs improving.
2、短文改错（10 分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。 文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（?），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（
）划掉。
改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
How to keep mental health
As we know, mental health links to our happiness index. However, it’s vital to keep our mental health. Here are some advice on how to do it.
Firstly, accept yourself true. Knowing your own potentials and making practical goal instead of setting high expectations can keep yourself away from heavy burden, thus enjoy good mental health. Secondly, be friendly and sociable. Life with friends is miserable. So make friends. It’s their comfort and support which help you go through hardship in life. Lastly, commit yourself to your career. Your efforts bring you a sense of achievement, which will in turn ensure your happiness.
In a brief, it pays to focus our attention on our mental health. The more, the best!
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3、短文改错（10 分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。 文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（?），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（
）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 Dear Mr. Li,
I’m Wang Tao. I’m written to tell you my opinion about employing a foreign language teacher. They are two factors to take into consider. For a thing, the sense of humor is necessary for a teacher, who makes his class interesting and lively. For another, ensure efficiency in teaching and learning, the foreigner’s ability to speak Chinese matters much, so only with the help of Chinese can they communicate with each other smoothly.
Various of activities out of class, such as English Evening and English Corner, should be organized by the foreign language teacher, which brings the students more chances to communicate with the teacher and improve his oral English.
4、短文改错（10 分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。 文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（?），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（
）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I’ve been playing volleyball since three years before. It started when a teacher set up volleyball club in our school, hope that more students would join in the sport. The club was very popular that many students signed up for it. To be honestly, at that time I just followed them without thinking. We practiced together on every Saturday morning. However, some of the students soon began to get boring and dropped out of the club. So I found I was quite enjoying it and I carry on. After training for some time, I was selected for the school team. What excited and proud I was!
5、短文改错（10 分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。 文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（?），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（
）划掉。
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修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
As a lucky student, I attended the 2017 National English Summer Camp holding in a beautiful city of South West from July 24 to 29, it was sponsored by the English Weekly. Over 100 students and 20 English teaching experts from all over the province take part in it. All the campers must speak English. During the sixth days, a series of English activities were organized. We also visited some places of interest as well. Therefore, we had a colorful farewell party. The camp provided us for a great number of value opportunities to speak English, make friends and exchange learning experience. A end of the camp I found myself English improved a lot.
6、短文改错（10 分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。 文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（?），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（
）划掉。
改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
ast week, my friends and me went to watch Jay Chou’s performance in Guangzhou. There are crowds of cheerful fans there, many of who came from other cities. Jay began his performance with one of his most famous song. We all cheered and shouted out his name, but some even cried with joy. When Jay began to sing the seventh song it called Sunny Day, it started to rain. Therefore, the concert was not interrupted and we got even more exciting in the rain. At last, Jay finished the concert with a speech, thank his fans for always supporting him. What memorable experience!
7、短文改错（10 分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。 文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（?），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（
）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
At the beginning of the year 2018, most part of China, including Kunming and Shaoguan, experience the heaviest snow in winter. This unexpected heavy snow made us unprepared and led
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many problems. The snow blocked city traffic and caused power cuts, make vehicles in streets run slowly and many traffic accidents happen. Besides, some highways were been closed and a lot of flights was canceled or delayed. Therefore, this surprising snow also brought much joy to people. He went out happily and took a good many pictures of the beautiful moments. Children were throwing snowballs or snowmen were seen everywhere.1 will always remember this magically snow.
8、短文改错（10 分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。 文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（?），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（
）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It was warm and sunny, so we decide to go for a swim. When I reached to the beach, my friends were already there. The sea was perfect, appearing as smoothly as a mirror. I felt quite pleased with it, and my friends were a little disappointing as they liked huge waves. When we got hungry and thirsty, we bought some hotdog and drinks from a nearby shop. After that, we became energetic enough for a football game. It surprised all was that my team won game. Then we relaxed for a while, sleep on the beach. At about half past four, we packed up my things and went home. We really had fun.
9、短文改错（10 分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。 文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（?），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（
）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last week I noticed Jack coughing on our math class. See this, I offered to take him to a clinic. There the doctor asked Jack how he had coughed sometimes for long time. Jack nodded his head immediate. The doctor then wrote a prescription with instruction on how to take the Chinese medicine. When Jack tasted the medicine, he almost brings it up. I comforted him with an old saying “Good medicine for health tastes bitter to the mouth”. Jack managed to swallow them unwillingly. But when he had recovered three days later, he felt amazing at the effect of the Chinese medicine.
10、短文改错（10 分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
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文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（
）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
When talked about my dream. I recalled my childhood, which I started learning to sing. At that time it was my interest led me to sing. Hard although I learned, I was happy then. And with time going on, I have gradually realized sing is my whole life. I like it or enjoy it. I want to stand on an even big stage to sing where not only will my dream be come true but also I can send my beautiful song to all the audience. I want to transfer happy and encouragement to the audience by singing, letting us cheer up.
11、短文改错（10 分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。 文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（?），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（
）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
An English party will be holding in the school hall at seven o’clock in the evening on November 12. We have prepared much wonderful programs for you. First, some teachers and students will give lectures on the important of English study. Beside, some students will introduce to us our rich experience of English study. In the end, some students will sing English songs for us. We’re sure of that these wonderful programs will impress you deep. Everyone was welcome to take an active part it. Don’t forget the time and address and don’t forget to tell us what you think of a party in your diary. Wish you had a pleasant time.
12、短文改错（10 分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。 文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（
）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Today, millions of people want learn or improve their English. Which is good, to study in
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Britain or in your own country?
The benefits of going to Britain seems obvious. You will listen to the language all the time, surround completely by the language wherever you would go and have to speak English if you are with the local people. In China, there is always possible to speak Chinese in class and the learning is slower. However, there are also advantage of studying at home. You don’t have to make big changes to your life. Beside, it’s much cheaper than going to Britain.
In my view, for most people without enough money, being al home is their only choice. A most important thing to do in this situation is make good use of your opportunities—speaking only English in class and using English whenever possibly outside the class.
13、短文改错（10 分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。 文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（?），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（
）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Stockholm, the capital of Sweden, hopes to stop using fossil fuel (化石能源) completely by 2040. Now the city wants larger lorries what cause more pollution to use bio-fuel, which are produced from waste. Stockholm is also working with Fortum, an energy company, to take advantage a city-wide heating system, use waste heat from supermarkets and stadiums to supply heat for homes. However, the city is trying to change people behavior, step by step. On one newly built estate (庄园), people are providing with tablets that show its real-time energy usage. This is to help them good understand how they use and waste gas, water and electricity.
14、短文改错（10 分）
（2016-2017学年宁夏银川一中高一上学期期末考试）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（?），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（
）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Leaving a store, I returned to my car only to find I have locked my keys and cell phone inside. The teenager riding his bike learnt about my embarrassed situation. I told him that even if I could call my wife, she wouldn’t bring him the car key because this was our only car. He handed me with his cell phone, “Calling your wife and tell her I’m going to get the key.” “That’s a ten-miles round trip,” I said. But he told me not worry about it. An hour late, he returned with the key. I offered him
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some money, so he refused, “Let’s just say I needed the exercise.”
15、短文改错（10 分）
（2016-2017学年宁夏银川一中高一上学期期末考试）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（?），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（
）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I don’t remember exact how old I was when I began to ride a bike. I only remembered how I practiced riding a bike in early years. When I first successfully rode a bike, that remains a vivid memory, my brother helped me with holding the back seat of the bike while I was riding. “Wow, I did it!”, cried I, as soon as he noticed I was riding without his hands hold it! I learnt quickly, and soon, even though my feet were not touching the ground, but I was able to cycle around six kilometer a day to school! It’s so lovely to remember which happened at that time.
16、短文改错（10 分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。 文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（?），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（
）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Saturday, our class paid the visit to the Welfare Centre for children in our city. On our arrival, we donated some gift to the kids, which made them very pleased. Then we did what we could help them. Some swept and tidied their rooms. Some play games with them. And others told interesting stories to them. The day passed quickly after we knew it.
Honestly speaking, though tired, they were much happier than ever that day. The reason is that when we help with others, we also get something more importantly. Therefore, show your love and care, or our society will be more beauty and more harmonious.
17、短文改错（10 分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。 文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（?），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（
）划掉。
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修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I didn’t realize the importance of working in groups since I was chosen monitor of my class in high school. At first, I did most of duties myself while other students cared few about class activities.
As a result, I was tired out and depressing. Then I turned to my teacher and he gave me some advice of
how to cooperate well with other. Therefore, I begin to realize the power of my classmates and have everyone to do his part in class.
From my experience, I strong feel that it is working in teams instead of on my own that has freed me from trouble and make me work efficiently. So we need the teamwork spirit in our lives.
18、短文改错（10 分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。 文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（?），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（
）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Friday I saw the worst weather in years. In the morning, the sun was completely blocked so that I could see something clearly. I stayed at home, look outside. That came into sight was a flash of lightning. Seconds later, the noise of thunder broke the silent. Then a strong wind starts to blow into my room. Pieces of paper on my desk was blown high into the air and some flew out the open window. Then I closed the window when it rained hard and near broke my window.
What a bad weather! I hate it so I can’t go out to play.
19、短文改错（10 分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。 文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（?），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（
）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Editor,
Recently our school has set up a rule that no student allowed to take their mobiles into class, which has aroused a lot of discussions among we students.
Many of the students feel strong against the rule, arguing that the mobile had become a
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necessary part of our life. They also consider that a must for us to get relaxing from our busy studies.
When it comes to me, like some other student I hold a different opinion. While a mobile phone can help us get some relief, with it we can be more devoted to our studies, but spare more time to communicate with those around us. Therefore, I believe in this school rule is beneficial to every student.
Yours, Li Hua
20、短文改错（10 分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。 文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（?），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（
）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I am the shared bike. I’d like to be on the street to serve for people. They can ride me just via a mobile app. But horrible things happen a few days ago. Several people stole some of us with paying their bills on the app but treated us badly. They broke my saddle and even threw my friends everywhere. We felt angry for which those bad guys had done. Thanks to some kindly people, we received careful “treatment”. Now, you help as well as the whole society’s attention is what we need most. We are designed to help people who are stuck the heavy traffic. We are neither toy nor private vehicles. Please obey the basic rules.
21、短文改错（10 分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。 文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（?），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（
）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Friday, the evening fell, but my parents hadn’t come back home yet. I stopped doing my homework but decided to make a meal for my family instead of just wait. It was my the first cooking. I went online to find information on how cook home-style dishes. With the step-by-step direction, I managed to make a dish. Then I tried to cook other. When my Parents got home, they were amazing to see the tasty dishes I made. Immediately my mum took pictures for them and my dad gave me a big hug. I real enjoyed the meal that evening.
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22、短文改错（10 分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。 文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（?），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（
）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Recently we had a class meeting on the topic of My Chinese Dream. Some mentioned the inspired Chinese Dream was put forward by President Xi. And others talked enthusiastically about his understanding of the Chinese Dream. We all believe that this dream will come true in the future. I also talked about my own dream. I had always wanted to be a doctor. Not only can doctors save people’s life but also they are doing a respectable job. Doctors can also help people to live a better life without their professional knowledge. To realize my dream, I can try to work hard from now on. I must learn as much as I can get into a good medical college, where I can prepare myself adequate for the job of a doctor.
I believe hard work is that it takes to accomplish my goal.
23、短文改错（10 分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。 文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（?），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（
）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last week I noticed Jack coughing on our math class. See this, I offered to take him to a clinic. There the doctor asked Jack how he had coughed sometimes for long time. Jack nodded his head immediate. The doctor then wrote a prescription with instruction on how to take the Chinese
medicine. When Jack tasted the medicine, he almost brings it up. I comforted him with an old saying “Good medicine for health tastes bitter to the mouth”. Jack managed to swallow them unwillingly. But when he had recovered three days later, he felt amazing at the effect of the Chinese medicine.
24、短文改错（10 分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。 文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（?），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（
）划掉。
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修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 One day, I was cooking in the kitchen when the telephone rings. I went to answer it immediately. She was my close friend, Lisa. When we were talking on phone, the fire alarm sounded. I ran back to the kitchen only to find the room full of smoke and the beef bad burnt. I quickly turned off the gas, opening all the windows, but then went out of the house. In my surprise, two fire engine were outside my house. I was quite worry. I told the firemen that it was my careless cooking that it caused the heavy smoke.
25、短文改错（10 分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。 文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（?），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（
）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
As is known to we all，America's national pastime is baseball．It has played in his country since the first settlers arrive．It was a national ball what was liked by many Americans at that time．Although baseball possibly developed from an English game，it is now thought of like an American sport．From the Little League to the Major League，player of all skill levels enjoy testing their power on the\．Famous players，exciting music but the standard stadium food of hot dogs，popcorns and peanuts are popularly among Americans，In a fact，
Americans make go to the baseball game a favorite summer outing for many Americans nowadays．
26、短文改错（10 分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。 文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（?），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（
）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
If we stand on a city street and looking up at the sky, the stars seems dim or far away. The lights of city blind us. Tall buildings shut out great parts of the sky.
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But let us go out and climb a hill on a clear summer night. The city’s lights and buildings left far behind. The sky seems like a soft blue curtain over our heads. And the stars are like diamond twinkling in the sky.
As we stand looking upward, we are doing something which men have been doing from the beginning of history. Wisely men and shepherds looked in wonder at the same pinpoints of light thousands of years ago. What were they made of? How did they come to be up there in the sky?
People watched the heavens to find answers of these questions. The study of stars is the old of all sciences.
27、短文改错（10 分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。 文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（?），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（
）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Two head are better than one.This proverb means we can make things are easier by working with others, who shows the significance of cooperation.
Take my experience as example.Once we were given quite a complicated physics problem by our teacher but we were expected to work it out in any possible way. Considering that I was very good at identifying physical principles and my friend Joe was better at performing complexly calculation, we decide to work together . Magically ,we solved a problem efficiently and even were better than the top student choose to work alone.
This experience really impressed myself a lot. So always keep it in mind that cooperation not only contributes greater working efficiency but also explores our potential.
28、短文改错（10 分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。 文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（?），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（
）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Friday, we were having our class while our teacher Miss Li suddenly slipped and fall to the ground. All the students were concern about her. Helped by some students, I carried her on back to the clinic immediately. Her left leg was turned out to be broken and she had to stay in
hospital for half a month. The following day, we paid a visit for her with flower and fruits. See her
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leg wrapped in bandages, all of us felt sorry for her, hoping she would recover soon. Unexpectedly, only five days late, Miss Li returned to the class on a wheelchair to give us lessons. We were deep moved, all rising to applaud her.
29、短文改错（10 分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。 文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（?），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（
）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 Dear Tom，
How time flies!It has been almost a year since your last visit． Last Sunday，I paid visit to one of the scenic spot in my hometown．The moment I reached the gate，I was puzzled by a sign，that reads\．\？\．It suddenly dawned on me that it referred\．I had a good laugh over it．When I came to the exit，I was shocked by another word\．It was then that I feel obliged to do something about it． Given the fact is that you are expert in English，I sincerely invite you to my hometown during the summer vacation．I'm firm convinced that you are more than delighted to do your part in promote the standard English．Let's make joint efforts to correct the shabby English，and undoubtedly it must be fun or meaningful． I am looking forward to your reply．
Yours， Li Hua．
30、短文改错（10 分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。 文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（?），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（
）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Every boy and every girl are eager for success．But what can we succeed in life？Here are my opinions：
First，we must be friendly and kindly．It allows us to make friends but survive wherever we are．Second，we must set a goal，which motivates us to pursue our dreams．Third，it's better to believe in us．Only with self﹣confidence we realize our goals．Fourth，we should develop good
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characters，such as a strong will and diligence，because good qualities help us to hold on to our dreams since we get into the trouble．
As far as I'm concerning，success belongs to those who keep on trying．So let's take actions now!
高考英语【短文改错】专项训练试题
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答案及解析
1、【答案】
I was often troubled by lack of confidences. So I applied for a job at an exhibition as? reporter last term.
confidence a
The exhibition was held annual to display the latest products in the field of education. At that time, I
annually
was responsible for interview parents who bought the learning tools. While talking with him, I found it
interviewing them was not so hard as I think. One lady even praised me but asked her son to learn from me. I realized the
thought and
experience was in great value and nothing was more excited than communicating with people. of exciting
From this experience, I am fully aware that we should take real action if our personality that needs
删除that
improving.
【解析】作者讲述了自己在展览馆当记者的工作经历及收获。
71. confidences →confidence.考查名词。confidence是不可数名词，没有复数形式，故confidences →confidence。
72. reporter 前加a.考查冠词。reporter是可数名词，此处表示作为一个记者，要加a.故reporter 前加a。
73. annual→ annually.考查副词。此处修饰动词held用副词，指每年举行，故annual→ annually。
74. interview →interviewing.考查动词形式。介词for后用动词的-in形式，故interview →interviewing。
75.him→them.考查动词。此处指代上句的parents who bought the learning tools.是复数形式，用them指代，故him →them。
76.think→thought.考查动词时态。与全文所给时态一致，此处也用一般过去时。故think →thought。
77.but→and.考查连词。此处指一位女士表扬我并且让她儿子向我学习，前后句是并列关系，不是转折。故but →and。
78.in→of.考查固定结构。be of +名词=be+形容词，此处指这次经历很有价值，故in →of。 79.excited→exciting.考查形容词。excited 兴奋的，exciting令人兴奋的，常用来修饰人；常用来修饰物。此处修饰物nothing用exciting，故excited →exciting。
80.去掉that.考查句子结构。if从句中主语是our personality，谓语动词是needs，此处不是从句，故去掉that。
2、【答案】
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How to keep mental health
As we know, mental health links to our happiness index. However, it’s vital to keep our mental health.
Therefore/Thus Here are some advice on how to do it. is
Firstly, accept yourself true. Knowing your own potentials and making practical goal instead of
truly goals
setting high expectations can keep yourself away from heavy burden, thus enjoy good mental health.
enjoying
Secondly, be friendly and sociable. Life with friends is miserable. So make friends. It’s their comfort and
without
support which help you go through hardship in life. Lastly, commit yourself to your career. Your efforts that
?bring you a sense of achievement, which will in turn ensure your happiness. will
In a brief, it pays to focus our attention on our mental health. The more, the best! better 【解析】本文是一篇说明文。文章叙述的是人们如何保持心里健康。
1.考查副词。句意：正如我们所知，心理健康与我们的幸福指数有关。因此，保持我们的心理健康是重要的。上下句是一种因果关系，故把However改成Therefore/Thus。
2.考查主谓一致。advice建议，是不可数名词，谓语动词用单数形式，故把are改成is。 3.考查副词。句意：真正地接受你自己。副词修饰动词，故把true改成truly。
4.考查名词复数。句意：了解自己的潜力，制定实际的目标，而不是设定很高的期望，可以让自己远离沉重的负担。结合句意goal应该用名词复数，故把goal改成goal。
5.考查现在分词。句意：了解自己的潜力，制定实际的目标，而不是设定很高的期望，可以让自己远离沉重的负担，结果享受良好的心理健康。此处是现在分词做自然的结果状语，故把enjoy改成enjoying。
6.考查介词。句意：没有朋友的生活是痛苦的。结合句意，故把with改成without。
7.考查强调句型。句意：这是他们的安慰和支持帮助你度过生活中的艰辛。此句是强调句型，故把which改成that。 8.考查时态。句意：你的努力将带给你一种成就感，这将反过来确保你的幸福。结合句意，句子用一般将来时态，故在bring前加will。
9.考查固定词组。In brief简而言之，故把a去掉。
10.考查比较级。The +比较级，the +比较级。越---，就越---。故把best改成better。
3、【答案】 Dear Mr. Li,
I’m Wang Tao. I’m written to tell you my opinion about employing a foreign language teacher. 【英语短文改错精编版】高考训练试题（30题含答案及解析） 第（16）页
writing opinions
They are two factors to take into consider. For a thing, the sense of humor is necessary for a teacher,
There consideration one
who makes his class interesting and lively. For another, ?ensure efficiency in teaching and learning, the
which to
foreigner’s ability to speak Chinese matters much, so only with the help of Chinese can they communicate
because/as with each other smoothly.
Various of activities out of class, such as English Evening and English Corner, should be organized by
或Various改为Varieties
the foreign language teacher, which brings the students more chances to communicate with the teacher and
improve his oral English. their
【解析】本文主要介绍了作者对关于聘请外语教师的意见。
1.考查动词。句意：我正在写信去告诉你关于聘请外语教师的意见。表主动，用主动语态。
2.考查名词。opinion是可数名词，在下文中谈到了几种意见，所以要用复数形式。 3.考查副词。句意：这里有两个因素要考虑。固定句型：There be…。 4.考查名词。固定短语：take into consideration考虑。
5.考查数词。固定短语：For one thing, for another一方面，另一方面。
6.考查关系代词。此处要填定语从句引导词，关系代词作主语，指代上文中的the sense of humor幽默感，所以要用which。
7.考查不定式。句意：为了确保教与学的效率，外国人说汉语的能力很重要。要用不定式作目的状语。
8.考查连词。句意：另一方面，为了保证教与学的效率，外国人说汉语的能力非常重要，因为只有借助汉语，他们才能顺利地进行交流。后半部分是原因。
9.考查介词。Various（各种各样的）是形容词，可以直接修饰后边名词，所以要去掉of；或者把Various换成名词Varieties，构成Varieties of （各种各样的）修饰后边名词，故去掉of或 Various改为Varieties.
10.考查代词。此处是指提高“学生们”的口语，所以应该用人称代词their。
4、【答案】
I’ve been playing volleyball since three years before. It started when a teacher set up ?volleyball
ago a club in our school, hope that more students would join in the sport. The club was very popular that 【英语短文改错精编版】高考训练试题（30题含答案及解析） 第（17）页
many
hoping so
students signed up for it. To be honestly, at that time I just followed them without thinking. We practiced
honest
together on every Saturday morning. However, some of the students soon began to get boring and dropped
bored
out of the club. So I found I was quite enjoying it and I carry on. After training for some time, I was selected
But carried for the school team. What excited and proud I was! How
【解析】作者讲述了喜欢打排球的原因和故事经过。
1. before →ago.考查同义词。before 表示过去某个时间起之前，ago表示从现在起多长时间之前。此处指从现在起三年前用ago，故before →ago.
2. volleyball前加a.考查冠词。句中club是可数名词，此处表示一个排球俱乐部，要加表示“一个”的冠词a，故volleyball前加a.
3. hope→hoping.考查现在分词。句中主语a teacher和动词hope是主动关系，此处作状语用现在分词，故hope→hoping.
4. very→so.考查固定结构。此处表示俱乐部如此受欢迎以至于许多学生报名，表示“如此…以至于”用so …that句型，故very→so.
5. honestly →honest.考查形容词。此处作动词be的表语用形容词，to be honest “说实话”，是固定短语，故honestly →honest.
6.去掉on.考查介词。表示每周六上午是every Saturday morning，every前不加介词，故去掉on.
7. boring →bored.考查形容词。boring 表示令人厌烦的，常修饰物；bored“无趣的“，常修饰物。此处指学生们感到厌烦用get bored，故boring →bored.
8. So →But.考查连词。许多同学感到打排球无趣就退出了俱乐部，但我发现很喜欢打排球。前后句是转折关系用连词but，故So →But.
9. carry →carried.考查动词时态。我发现很喜欢打排球就继续了下来，与and前的动词found时态一致也用一般过去时，故carry →carried.
10.What→How.考查感叹句。引导感叹句时What感叹名词，How感叹形容词或副词，此处感叹形容词excited and proud用how引导感叹句，故What→How.
5、【答案】
As a lucky student, I attended the 2017 National English Summer Camp holding in a beautiful city of
held
South West from July 24 to 29, it was sponsored by the English Weekly. Over 100 students and 20 English
Which或it前加and
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teaching experts from all over the province take part in it. All the campers must speak English. During the
took
sixth days, a series of English activities were organized. We also visited some places of interest as well. six
Therefore, we had a colorful farewell party. The camp provided us for a great number of value opportunities
Besides/Additionally/Moreover with valuable to speak English, make friends and exchange learning experience. A? end of the camp I found myself
the my
English improved a lot. 【解析】
1.考查非谓语动词。英语夏令营和举行是被动关系，用过去分词。故holding改为hold。 2.考查关系代词或连词。夏令营是先行词，在定语从句中做主语，指物逗号后用which，也可以通过添加连词表示并列。故it改为which或it前加and。
3.考查动词时态。参加是过去的事情。故take改为took。 4.考查数词。表示六天用数词。故sixth改为six。
5.考查副词。前面没有说到我们做什么，因此这里不能用我们也做…。故删除also。
6.考查副词。参观和参加告别聚会是并列的，因此用另外。故填Therefore 改为Besides/Additionally/Moreover。
7.考查介词。provide somebody with something提供给某人某物。故填for改为with。 8.考查形容词。形容词修饰名词。故value改为valuable。 9.考查冠词。at the end of在…之末。故填the。
10.考查代词。形容词性物主代词修饰名词。故myself改为my。 6、【答案】
ast week, my friends and me went to watch Jay Chou’s performance in Guangzhou. There are crowds
I were
f cheerful fans there, many of who came from other cities. Jay began his performance with one of his whom
ost famous song. We all cheered and shouted out his name, but some even cried with joy. When Jay songs and
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egan to sing the seventh song it called Sunny Day, it started to rain. Therefore, the concert was not However
nterrupted and we got even more exciting in the rain. At last, Jay finished the concert with a speech, excited
hank his fans for always supporting him. What ?memorable experience!
hanking a
【解析】本文介绍一次难忘的经历——周杰伦广州演唱会。
1.此处是句子主语，所以用代词主格，故把me---I。
2.根据Last week,可知句子用一般过去时态，故把are---were。 3.介词of后面用指人用whom引导定语从句，故把who---whom。 4.根据one of，可知后面用名词复数，故把song---songs。
5.句意：我们都欢呼起来，大声喊出他的名字，有些人甚至高兴地叫了起来。此处表示递进的并列关系，故把but---and。
6.句意：被叫做Sunny Day的第七首歌曲。此处是过去分词做后置定语，故把it去掉。 7.根据it started to rain.和the concert was not interrupted可知上下句表示转折，故把Therefore---However。
8.句意：在雨中我们变得更兴奋。故把exciting--- excited。 9.此处是现在分词做伴随状态，故把thank--- thanking。
10.句意：多么令人难忘的一次经历！可知在What后面加a。
7、【答案】
At the beginning of the year 2018, most part of China, including Kunming and Shaoguan, experience
parts experienced
the heaviest snow in winter. This unexpected heavy snow made us unprepared and led? many problems.
to
The snow blocked city traffic and caused power cuts, make vehicles in streets run slowly and many traffic
making
accidents happen. Besides, some highways were been closed and a lot of flights was canceled or delayed.
were
Therefore, this surprising snow also brought much joy to people. He went out happily and took a good many
However They
pictures of the beautiful moments. Children were throwing snowballs or snowmen were seen
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5.us改为ourselves；考查反身代词，由句意可知，此处应用反身代词ourselves作宾语 6.we前加can；考查倒装句，副词only谓语句首，句子用半倒装，故在主语we前面加情态动词can，构成倒装句．
7.since改为when/if；考查状语从句，分析句意为\当/如果我们陷入困境…\，所以此处用when/if引导时间/条件状语从句．
8.去掉the；考查冠词，get into trouble为固定词组，意为\有麻烦\．
9.concerning改为concerned；考查固定搭配，As far as I'm concerned是固定短语，意为\依我看，就我而言\．
10.actions改为action；考查固定搭配，'take action意为\采取行动\，为固定短语
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