江苏省2014届高三英语一轮复习 写作攻略训练（12）
第五部分 书面表达（满分25分）
2012年11月5日，你校在大操场举行了升旗仪式。主题是：注意安全，珍爱生命。学生代表李阳作了发言；接着校长提出了具体的要求。请你就此事用英语给写一篇报道。 注意：报道必须包括以下内容。
学 生 校 长 安全隐患多（ 体育运动损伤，交通事故，食物中毒??） 注意安全, 多学点急救知识 一人安全, 全家幸福 校园安全,师生共同重视 严禁校园骑车; 教学区内,不得进行球类运动 上下楼梯, 靠右慢行 教室无人,确保窗关门锁 上学及回家路上遵守交通规则 要求： 1）可根据内容要点适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 2）词数：150字左右。首段已给出，不计入总词数。
3）参考词汇： 安全隐患： hidden threat against safety 食物中毒：food poisoning 教
学区：academic areas
On November 5, our school held a flag-raising ceremony in the playground with the theme “For your safety, for your life!”
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书面表达
On November 5, our school held a flag-raising ceremony in the playground with the theme “For your safety, for your life!”
Li Yang, one of the students made a speech. He said that safety concerned every one of us and hidden threat against safety was everywhere. We may easily get injured in sports, traffic accidents , or get sick from food poisoning. He called on us to pay more attention to safety and try to learn more about first aid. He also mentioned that we should take good care of ourselves
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for the sake of our family’s happiness.
Later, our headmaster gave us some specific requirements on campus. Since a safe environment on campus is everyone’s responsibility, it’s high time we did something to ensure our own safety at school. Riding bicycles on campus is strongly prohibited. No ballgames are allowed in the academic areas. Keep to the right when going upstairs or downstairs. Make sure that the windows are closed and doors are locked when the last one leaves the classroom. What’s more, always obey the traffic rules on your way home or to school.
第三节：书面表达（共1题，满分25分）
假如你是高中生李华，有感于校园中存在的随地吐痰（to spit）和乱丢垃圾（to litter）等不文明行为，请用英语给校长写一封信，信中应包括以下内容：
1．说明写信目的； 2．对这些行为进行批评； 3．提出建议（至少两点）；
注意：1．可根据内容要点适当发挥，但不要逐条翻译。
2．词数150左右。
3．信的抬头、落款及信的第一句已给出（不计词数）。
November 15, 2012 Mr. Headmaster,
I’m Li Hua, a student from Class 1, Senior III. ________________________________________________________________________
Your faithfully, Li Hua
One possible version:
November 15, 2012 Mr. Headmaster,
I am Li Hua, a student from Class 1, Senior III. I am writing to draw your attention to some improper behaviour among us students: spitting and littering. It makes our school dirty and unpleasant, and does hard to the image of our school.
I always feel ashamed whenever I see this. It is clearly not appropriate for a student to spit and litter about. I wonder if the school could place more dustbins around and set up specific rules against such behaviour. At the same time, students should be encouraged to develop good habits and better behave themselves. I believe that, with the joint efforts of both teachers and students, our school will become a more enjoyable place in the near future.
Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Li Hua 评分细则
一、有以下情况之一的，在正常评分以后再扣9分
1.全文没有使用任何比较复杂的语言结构，例如从句、倒装句等 2.全文没有使用任何比较高级的表达方式的 3.全文没有使用任何关联词语的
二、有以下情况之一的，在正常评分以后再扣5分 1.书写潦草，不规范，影响理解的 2.卷面不洁，乱涂改的
3.因审题不清而全文人称使用错误的 4.动词、时态、人称错误达3处以上的 5.句子结构严重错误达3处以上的
三、有以下情况之一的，在正常评分以后再扣2分 1.全文不分段 2.词数少于130 3.词数多于170
四、有以下情况之一的，扣2分 1.每遗漏一个次要点的
2.冠词、介词用错，其他单词拼写错误分别达4处以上的
3.大小写、标点符号分别达4处以上的 五、有以下情况之一的，扣5分 1.每遗漏一个主要点的 六、有以下情况的，不扣分
1.为使用比较高级的表达方式而出现的些许错误 2.紧扣主题作适当发挥时出现的些许错误 七、有以下情况的，不以评分，以0分计 1.没有使用0.5毫米的黑色签字笔 2.答题中有学校、班级或个人真实信息的
