Yours,
Lucy
Dear Amy,
(写信开头寒暄) How are you, Amy?(总起)I'm going to Linyi on summer holiday.(第一天) On the first day，I'm going to see Xueye Lake.
I will take picture there.(第二天) On the second day, I'm going to visit my grand parents and stay there. (第三天) On the third day, I'm going to my uncle David’s company. And we’re going to play football there. (第四天) On the forth day, I'm going to get back and have a sleep. (总结) My holiday well be busy. What about your holiday?
Yours,
Yin Xichang
每句都要用将来时间，红字标出
注意写信格式，绿字标出
作文九：My Bedroom(我的卧室)
用好there be句式，注意就近原则。两篇文章都注意按照一定的顺序描写，值得学习。
My Bedroom
My bedroom is very lovely. In my bedroom, there is a yellow bed. There is a pink clock over the small bed. There is a white closet near the bed, and there are many cloth e s in my closet. There is a big window and two blue curtain s west of the closet. My bedroom is small, but I love it very much. This is my small bedroom. What about yours?
My Bedroom
My bedroom is small and nice. First, you can see a big light on the ceiling. Then, you can see a desk near the bookshelf. There are many book s in the bookshelf. The bookshelf is near my bed. There is a lovely bear on my bed. Every night it sleep s with me. I like it very much.I like my bedroom. What about you?
